Endless Poem by Jeremy Horsford
Endless
My heart is open.
Spend time with my subconscious.
You are safe here.
Walk with me along the endless sands of time.
Our world is ours to shape.
Time is limited to the imagination. Time's horizon is an after thought.
The galaxies in your eyes represent an infinite journey.
The moment I saw you, we had already lived a lifetime.
Our story will be forever in the minds of future generations.
You will remain in my heart until the end.
You have a talent Jeremy.//Do not say wise sayings in the poem.Every verse has to be in armony with the other ones, armony in meanings, in sounds, in rythm.//Try to use words which depict, paint the meaning you want.Sometimes only pictures can express the thoughts.'Dress' your thoughts with icons, metaphoric words......Trust yourself in shortness, simplicity and clarity search your success
You will remain in my heart until the end. Jerry, hope you keep to this promise. Well written - Hope you may read my poems on poem hunter.
It is a beautiful poem that brings joy to the heart. Congratulation Jeremy.
A very nice love poem with a smooth flow. Enjoyed. Congrats.
a lovely poem of love's ongoing adventure with out end? nicely penned Jeremy
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10/1/2024 5:20:42 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Beautifully written, on a topic close to my heart, I like the chemistry between love and the cosmos... :)
I like your reply, well done.