Endless Poem by Jeremy Horsford

Endless

Rating: 4.8


My heart is open.

Spend time with my subconscious.

You are safe here.

Walk with me along the endless sands of time.

Our world is ours to shape.

Time is limited to the imagination. Time's horizon is an after thought.

The galaxies in your eyes represent an infinite journey.

The moment I saw you, we had already lived a lifetime.

Our story will be forever in the minds of future generations.

You will remain in my heart until the end.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Taniya Kundu 03 January 2016

Beautifully written, on a topic close to my heart, I like the chemistry between love and the cosmos... :)

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Richard Antwi 22 June 2020

I like your reply, well done.

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Dimitrios Galanis 08 December 2015

You have a talent Jeremy.//Do not say wise sayings in the poem.Every verse has to be in armony with the other ones, armony in meanings, in sounds, in rythm.//Try to use words which depict, paint the meaning you want.Sometimes only pictures can express the thoughts.'Dress' your thoughts with icons, metaphoric words......Trust yourself in shortness, simplicity and clarity search your success

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Carol Carter 16 October 2016

I like your critique. Are you a teacher for writing?

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Dimitrios Galanis 20 October 2016

My university's studies were literature critic.

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Richard Antwi 22 June 2020

You will remain in my heart until the end. Jerry, hope you keep to this promise. Well written - Hope you may read my poems on poem hunter.

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 February 2018

Ours to shape! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 07 February 2018

It is a beautiful poem that brings joy to the heart. Congratulation Jeremy.

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 February 2018

A very nice love poem with a smooth flow. Enjoyed. Congrats.

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Tom Allport 07 February 2018

a lovely poem of love's ongoing adventure with out end? nicely penned Jeremy

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Jeremy Horsford

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