Quietly endures
Without anger or reproach
Suffering for my sake.
Takes my hand
Leading me forth
Safe from each burning land.
although im not very big on christian opetry i think this is a 10. -never abandon your faith it's the last thing to leave you.
Colin Ian Jeffery...there's no other person on earth who could lead our hand..yet suffered for our sake. Our faith will always guide our way...thank your for sharing this great piece. Tess
never let your faith die... its the only entity that leads till the end... :) simple and bful... like a prayer... :)
Written well with feeling. Simply expressed. Regards, Margery R.
Your 6-4-6 stanza meter does, indeed, add much to the placement of these cherishing words...Endymion...and what a historical figure/legend for a title! 'without reproach'...this, the most worthy phrase! Indeed! A kind read, a soothing read!
This is moving and comforting. So few words express so much.
Very good but quite sad. Again by hugo -my very name endure the cruel doomed. He and you let me think
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
be safe with your faith...it is pure....nicely written