Evading Outlaws Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Evading Outlaws

Rating: 5.0


My horse is stumbling in the dark;
that isn't good at all;
while I am clinging to his neck
and trying not to fall.

We must have traveled twenty miles
since they thought I was dead
with bullet holes all through my hat
and one that grazed my head.

I know they're still back there somewhere;
can't let me get away.
If it were known the things they did,
there would be hell to pay.

And now my horse has fallen down;
he's lost a lot of blood
and has no strength to carry on;
he lies here in the mud.

I crouch behind a scrub oak tree,
my pistol in my hand.
When they arrive I'll be right here
to make my final stand.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Dedicated to my friend Cowboy Ron Williams, who has the Member Poem of the Day today, ‘Snowing in Durango'.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Wood 28 December 2022

Evading outlaws, evading in-laws, it's all the same - they're all out to get you. Cowboy Ron would have got away.

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Susan Williams 21 January 2023

Wow! Echoes of Cowboy Ron and Louis L'Amour! ! ! ! ! Well be seeing John Wayne striding through here next! May you always evade the outlaws, my delightful friend!

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Kim Barney 21 January 2023

Dear Susan, so good to hear from you! It's so good to have you back among the living again. Thank you so much for the comment!

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Smoky Hoss 06 January 2023

Butch and Sundance would be proud. The Wild Bunch rides on...

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Kim Barney 12 January 2023

Thank you, my friend, for the comment.

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Bri Edwards 30 December 2022

OK, I plan to give Ron Williams' (Cowboy Ron Williams') poem a look-see aka evaluafion. : ) 'Snowing in Durango'

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Bri Edwards 30 December 2022

The poem is so good that I didn't remember if it had rhyming or not. I THOUGHT it had GREAT rhyming till I reviewed it and found none! ! ;)

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Kim Barney 31 December 2022

Look again. The rhymes are there! You were right the first time.

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Bri Edwards 30 December 2022

It was 'nice' knowin' you, Kim. Five stars, IF I could find any. It must be overcast on PH...............AGAIN. No stars are visible. : ( bri

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Kim Barney 31 January 2023

To find a star, you needn't look far. I see a star so much clearer whenever I look in the mirror!

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