Evening Sky Poem by Joseph James Breunig 3rd

Evening Sky

Rating: 4.6

Gazing into a starry night,
I see a deep indigo sky
with perfect placement of twinkling light.
Stars reveal the expanse of time
from before the birth of humanity;
their existence came from dynamic energy
which was created by spoken word
that no man has ever heard.
Solitary spirit of awesome might
painted this heavenly canvas
with a flick of His hand and uttered thought.
Divine creation shared with you and me -
It's part of our heritage and His eternal legacy.

Author Notes

By Joseph J. Breunig 3rd, © All rights reserved.
Author/poet, Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory

Sunday, November 27, 2005
Topic(s) of this poem: faith
Marji Berry 27 December 2006

Thank you for sharing your beautiful Evening Sky with me!

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Conor Dowd 17 October 2006

Hi Joseph. Really enjoyed that. Good poem. Keep up the good work. Cheers Conor

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joey oo 16 October 2006

Such a seemingly 'endless' subject - captured beautifully. I always gaze up at the sky when I take the dog out last thing at night - every night it's different - it always fills me with wonder and awe... A brilliant poem - thank you for sharing... take care. joey

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Cecil (cj) Krieger 14 September 2006

Nice write Joseph... a fine wordsmith!

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 30 July 2006

We gain so much awareness from observation. To gaze in the 'Evening Sky' reminds me of the communication between stars and man! All that transpires has a timeless effect yet what is seen has happened so many light years ago. We remain there staring and absorbing. I like this poem very much. L

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon 30 September 2022

"His eternal legacy" for you and me', seminal works, dear poet. Top score

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Chinedu Dike 30 October 2019

Well expressed thoughts in persuasive poetic expressions with conviction. An insightful creation. Thanks for sharing, James.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 March 2019

Evening sky leads towards a starry sky. With deep trust you see the deep indigo sky. Existence comes with trust and twinkling light reveals time. This poem is very excellently penned that amazes mind. Divine creation is beautifully shared with us. This is very nice poem that motivates readers....10

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Laura Green 12 September 2008

such beautiful imagery which creates a vivid image and pays homage to our creator. My analysis could be wrong, but i love the way you allude to the scientific aspects of the universe as well as complement the creator. Well written indeed

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Nikunj Parikh 15 March 2007

wonderful evening sky..... great work keep it up! !

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