Eyan Your Poet Poem by Eyan Desir

Eyan Your Poet

Rating: 5.0


For all my love is free
So enter this chamber
And read to your heart's desire
Because words painted
With complexity
Flow as the fountain
With hidden beauty
Only in rivers of time
It can be unfurled
I offer simplicity
A greater beauty
Understood by all minds


Because the heart burns
For love and adventure
These pages are filled
With romance to light fire
Advise for wetting the mind
Pain that will open an eye
Sweetness to make angels smile


Since honesty stains my plate
Witness the truth not lies
the humbleness that falls
Upon water's face
Is as sweet as kisses from heaven
From the mountain peak
I will pour my love....

Gently on paper

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 23 November 2009

Awesome self ode, well delivered thoughts and feelings, fine flow of figurative language....Great lines touching your readers heart and you have captivated your readers interest here! ! ! well done.........

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Luwi Habte 24 November 2009

what a Gentle man on the paper Eyan I can see your vivid ideas and I can imagine how smart and talented you are let me call you a great poet, and a gentle man on paper. we all love you Eyan, best wishes ur pen friend luwi

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i dig this poem wonderful poem this be.

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Romeo Della Valle 25 November 2009

Now I can see clearly, the man behind the mask, great work, keep it up Eyan, you have a long way to go and a lot to show....You got my vote...10++++

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Beka ? ? ? 26 November 2009

nice poem i enjoyed it

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Jean Dament 12 December 2009

A heartfelt piece that expresses well the enjoyment you get from writing poetry. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us. Spiritsong

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Saeid Hadavand 06 December 2009

Nice try my friend. Go on.

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Nikunj Sharma 02 December 2009

the overall poem creates a friendly vibe...good flow, gentle and simple words and it warms the heart....this is a good poem...keep it up

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young writer Athira 30 November 2009

''from the mountain peak I'll pour my love gently on paper''........... Stunning Eyan.......

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. .... 28 November 2009

Oh men If I say I don't like your work I lie But....you can get even better.... with a little poetic touch..

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