Eyes (Dedication) Poem by Sarvesh Kulkarni
Eyes (Dedication)
As I gaze into your eyes,
I delve into your being.
Travel in your overwhelming vastness,
in hidden spaces,
of unuttered words,
and in your inconsequential moments.
Moments that just.........are.
I completely inhale
all your becomings.
And wonderfully,
unknown to me,
as I come out,
I slide away, softly
in one dropp of tear, from your eyes
a dropp of fulfilment.
a dropp of your own realization
of my immersion in you.
I am captivated by your wording in this poem. A wonderful imaginative delightful poem. The words touching, and filled with emotion. A great write
Sarvesh, I've written many poems prompted by eyes. You capture all the depth and vastness of eyes. You are marvellous, wonderful, it all comes out here. Mark
hats off.....why didnt i read this before........brilliant write
very terrific piece.. thoughts are maturely thought of... really wonderful....meaningful ...eyes...the mirror of love...the mirror of anyone's feelings... i like this.....10++++
what wonderful expressions you displayed through this brilliant poem....superb...10
wow! ! ! ! ! eyes they are the mirrors of ones soul beautiful sarvesh. I liked this ++++10 anjali (somewhat similar to mine read this Your Beautiful Eyes)
melting down into those eyes...good piece, Sarvesh...awe fillied lines...sweet and softly romantic...10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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the maturity of thought n expression i see in what u write amazes me, sarvesh!