Fatherless Child. Poem by JOSE MURGUIA

Great work. I could feel the emotions with-in your poem.

wow. I dont know my father & i wont. U need to just live your life freely.

Jose, no one in this world is fatherless or motherless or spouseless for, God is our everything! Things will bw fine if only we listen to His calls and keep His codes.good, short poem. dr john celes

for a short peom, people may think of it as that, but if you read it with emotion, this peom gives off a deep feeling, and thast what peoms should do, try to give off some feeling, which your peoms usually do, great job.

short sweet and to the point great poem man

An economy of words heightens the impact of this touching write.

This poem is really touchin........I LOVE it! !

Endearing childlike simplicity in the phrasing. Well done.

With a format like this, It is easy to do too much. You did a great job with succint phrasing. =]

that was a great poem..i liked it alot..and the poem just flowed very nicely