Mihaela Pirjol


Feel The Light! - Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

Life will give you gifts, at times when
you are not ready to receive them:

feel the gratitude!

Life will offer you splendorous surprises
before you finish mourning the past:

step into the light!

You have become comfortable in obscurity,
the light, however bright, frightens you:

believe in light!

You have become a creature of darkness,
you fear to show your face to your fate:

fate loves you more!

You no longer love; you no longer hope;
Life was fierce; it made you lose your faith:

today, you feel the light again!

Topic(s) of this poem: hope, light, love


Comments about Feel The Light! by Mihaela Pirjol

  • Tom Allport (2/28/2020 4:53:00 AM)

    A wonderful write of those that have seen the light.......well penned (Report)Reply

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  • Aniruddha PathakAniruddha Pathak (12/18/2019 5:33:00 AM)

    Ah such subtlety, such a depth,
    and in a few lines you have covered a lot to mull over.
    Marvellous indeed.
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  • Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion (12/18/2019 1:24:00 AM)

    Simply amazing, dear Ma’am
    Mihaela... Well conveyed...10++
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  • Jankovic ZoranJankovic Zoran (12/17/2019 6:01:00 PM)

    " ...You have become a creature of darkness,
    you are afraid to show your face to your fate..." Exellent my dear, when the stain removal operation is completed then the blind of love are also seen.
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  • Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain (12/17/2019 9:50:00 AM)

    A magnificent piece of work! Beautiful expression! Appreciated and admired.....Full marks! (Report)Reply

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  • Magadha RaniMagadha Rani (12/17/2019 8:30:00 AM)

    Life will offer you splendorous surprises
    before you finish mourning the past:
    step into the light! Beautiful words dear mam. An excellent poem. thank you for sharing....10++++++
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  • Kingsley EgbukoleKingsley Egbukole (12/17/2019 8:13:00 AM)

    Regardless of the past, pick yourself up and embrace the good things of life...10. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 17, 2019



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