Fireworks Comments

Great description of fireworks! You bring them close and let us see better. I can almost hear the booms just reading your poem. DC

Kirei I LIKE FIREWORKS! I was mad when my brother didnt take me to watch the fireworks but reading your poems, it feels like my wish fulfilled =)

i love fireworks especially in new years eve thank sir for your imaginative nice poem

Every country got its own speciality of celebrations; the time in the year; the occasion etvc.But fireworks are common. good poem.......10

creative and expressive in words used.

Wishing for Family’s health Longevity, happiness Desirable things and the ocassion makes the poem live! rgds

No trip to scenic and historical Japan would not be complete without seeing a Fireworks display in honor of the Royal family, Ahmad. Apparently, you have enjoyed just such a privilege, and you have written quite vividly about that thrilling experience. Your fine poem's imagery brims with the excitement and delight of the occasion. Carl.

...psychedelic imagery!

have you visited japan lately? it looks like, nice details to include here.

Wording is explosive as the fireworks

Hi, Ahmad. I like this poem very much. I like that you started out with colorful blossoms and moved onto a fireworks display and (I guess) the rivers where these celebrations took place. Very good. I gave you a 9.

I just can imagine the fireworls, good job!

Such a simple topic and yet expressed so wonderfully. I use to love watching fireworks as a little girl with my family and this just brought a flood of memories back to me, thank you.