First Step Poem by Kranthi Pothineni
First Step
My eyes filled with blue
My legs felt the cold
My skin feels the heat
On a blue oceans bank
I am sitting in calm
Thinking about its calm
Thinking about its water
About its tides and depth
Its currents and circulations
And also its deadly species
I am also thinking about
Its mother-of-pearl inlay
Of ores mined in its bed
About decorative shells
And many more materials
Now I am at its bank
To swim its blue water
To swim its rough tides
To swim all its currents
To swim its life for life
Life may end in gold
Life may end in blue
However it may end
Whatever may happen?
At least ends by trying
So I moved from bank
And took my first step
My first step into ocean
No idea where will I end
But had taken the first step
Made me wonder about life and it's - here today gone tomorrow.
Life itself is mysterious, and knowledge is a vast as ocean...what ever it will be great you have taken the first step of going to the light of success.......meaningful poem...10
Get off your rump and live 'LIFE' - this is what i got from it.. hehe.. I like this poem
IF life is a ocean, sure we have to make the first step, boldly.
A very telling poem. Nothing beats a trial, but a failure: even if one fails, at least he has tried.
as i see the past...the poem spotted my last.....thank you for the poem...a good reflection of life..a 10+++++
Courage and resoluteness are the right steps to surpass any distress in life...good write...your poem gives a clear message here, Kranthi...10
It is great that you have taken your first step in the ocean of life. Good Luck, Kranthi.
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4/17/2024 9:55:26 PM # 1.0.0.1119
truly poetic and full of raw emotion and thought..brilliantly done! u amazing! !