We are the chosen pair of an eternal waltz
To sing and dance in timeless rhythm
Blend in indivisible togetherness
Though our feet are not laid on carpeted floor
And no cheering crowd to applaud the show
concise bliss of two souls blended in fusion of eternal love......waltzing to the music of pain and happiness, poor in materaial wealth but exquisitely rich in the essential ingredient of feelings
Show must go on with cheers or without cheers for predestined is life for the chosen pair to the eternal waltz..... Valsa.......touching and very philosophical......great write
short but rich in content. Whether there are people to applaud or not, keep on the show. I also like the idea of the tied feet. Good job!
So nicely it is written here. Once when two minds are in unison, there needs no carpet or audience, still they can dance around throughout the night.
Waltz is beautiful group dance where sing and dance go together in timeless rhythm. When unison raises male and female with their pair of feet dance in absence of cheering crowd too. Nice presentation. Thanks.
True union of minds and the most graceful steps made by the feet of the duo in togetherness! Here is a five liner dancing into the minds....
A couple feeling eternal togetherness in performing waltz of life together. beautiful five liner.
The need of every human soul...such connection, to last forever. A sweet and tender poem. Love it!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
An amazing five liner I really liked all the five lines but if one asks me to choose a single line I shall choose the following line: - Though our feet are not laid on carpeted floor