Flame Poem by ramesh rai

Flame

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The flame,
coming out from different source
May be the Sun
May be the candle
or any thing else,
It enlightens the area.

The flame of wisdom
enlightens the universe
The flame of the indiscipline mind
burns the universe

The flame of hatred
makes chaos in the world
The flame of Love
inspires for a new beginning

The flame of agony
makes the world unhappy
The flame of despair
takes the world to ruin

The flame of delusion
misguides the world
The flame of terrorism
forget every thing

The flame of violence
does not recognize any one
The flame of Non-violence
make the world prosperous

The flame of hypocrisy
An unnecessary burden to the world.

What flame do you like to lit
choose it
it must not be obstacle in our path
the wheel of the nature must not stop
it brings peace and prosperity in our daily life
our coming generation must not
have to bow their head
they must not have to see the sufferings
of their fellowmen
where there is smile on each face
We must ensure.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tanja Bulovic 11 August 2011

I think you chose your flame well. :)

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Romeo Della Valle 11 August 2011

CONGRATULATIONS! You are officially considered a CITIZEN OF THE WORLD, like me. You have posted a powerful and humanistic poem which is well penned and poignant! I hope it will touch many readers like it touched me! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with your great talented works! Love and Peace for always! In Poetry yours, Romeo from New York! ...

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Kolawole Ajao 14 August 2011

You have already lit the best of flames in this poem. Those who have ears, let them hear. Thanks.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 15 August 2011

the concept of flame is concieved well and put nicely. the word 'may be ' be 'maybe'

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Dylan Gaudreault 01 September 2011

great poetry its deep i like it keep em comin

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Akhtar Jawad 14 June 2014

All the soothing light flames may be covered with a single word the flame of justice and on the other side fire of injustice. Justice with ourselves, justice with the society, justice with the mother planet are once again compounded in one, as justice with the creator. For me this the theme of your great poem.

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Shahzia Batool 15 July 2013

Beautiful poem...that's how a poet decodes, in a variety of manner, the objects of nature and things...! ! !

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Heather Wilkins 01 June 2013

there are so many flames to be lit and shared. nicely written

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Sanjay Pandey 14 March 2012

Wonderful, I have not heard so many meanings of FLAME as you given.Everybody should try to enlighten the flame to bring peace and prosperity in the world.Also everybody should use his flame in constructive works. Thanks for your flame.

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Allemagne Roßmann 16 September 2011

Flame added to your fame here..well written

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