Flowers.. Poem by JOSE MURGUIA

Only the 2nd poem I have read of yours and so touching, it caught me by surprise.

what a great peace, every sad at the end.....it's a 10/10

That was truly moving, I rated it a 10. =) -Sam

I love the simple poems where emotions are expressed lucidly and so effectivley. Jose, one may read your poem and think they know exactly where it's going and then the ending hits you like a ton of bricks. Thats what poetry is all about...expecting the unexpected especially when it comes to emotions. Great poem: -)

Wow, what a whiplash ending... I did not see that coming... like an episode of the Twilight Zone... what a cautionary tale... like the song says, 'Shower the people you love with love.' the next second is not guaranteed to anyone.

It was the first poem of yours which I chose & read.It was perfect & I really loved it.I hope the others will be this much nice too...

moving Poem! keep giving Flowers to her, because they are among the best way to express your sincere Love feelings/ 10 for your Apologies

This poem has great meaning. You write it out well. Very sad and touching, it makes the reader really feel and think. The ending is very deep. Written out very well and with lots of heart. Well done. DC

nice sad lyric poem, very well written...touching...10+++++

This is a nice poem, touching.