Fog Poem by Valsa George
Fog
On a cold December dawn
Came the Fog, riding down
With long fleecy beard in white
And wavy hair so thin and light.
When he arrived all at once
Speeding vehicles blinked their eyes
Slithering down through narrow lanes,
They honked the horns on all the curves.
Housetops stood in hazy mist
No one out to jog with zest
Sheep in pens were still in rest
Bulbs lay dormant under the crust.
The air was full of snowy frost
The ships were bleary over the coast
They skimmed the waters without haste
Their flags fluttering on the mast
The bustling city lay so dull
Wrapped around in folds of wool
Trees in rows were cuddling still
Their leaves shivering in the chill
As the sun showed up on the height
The fog quivered in sudden fright
Hurrying away to hide outright
The coward vanished out of sight.
Dear madam, Fog a real beauty, I admit I missed this wonderful poem so long. It is a real Village beauty. Simple natural charm. I wish you a very long active life to enrich the poetic horizon.
Phenomenal write on one of Nature's beauties so beautifully scripted with wonderful and lively words....Valsa.... you deserve 10/10 for beautiful composition
A very beautiful description of the winter fog with so many minute details... enjoyed in reading
Truly, there is something unique about the fog. Though common, it's really a fascinating phenomenon. Enjoyed this delightful read.
When Fog comes on a cold December dawn, great changes appear before us. Speedy vehicles blinks their eyes. Housetops stands in hazy mist, bulbs lay dormant under the crust. Air is filled with snowy frost. Sheep don't come out of their pens. An insightful inscription has been made by you dear madam, I like this poem very much. Really beautiful. Five stars.
in sudden fright......wonderful expression.Thank u.anjandev Roy.
The poem inspires to visualise the cold and foggy December dawns in Kochi. Thank you Valsa
An attractive depiction has been made on winter fog. Beautiful poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 11:53:52 AM # 1.0.0
The air was full of snowy frost! With the ways of nature. Nice work.