Painting beautiful words
On an ugly portrait
Does not make the dust
Under a carpet disappear
Giving a frog fresh roses
Will make him elated
Spill the truth and break his heart
It's a good cause of pain
That removes wax in an eye
Correcting your seeds
Means it will blossom
Into a brilliant plant
Giving fake comments...
Makes! terrible poets.
well, as a poem this is so nice as an idea..i don't like it... am not going to talk more, cuz we have talked abt this a lot through private aren`t we? so keep on writing..but not blaming.. cuz i know you are the greatest poet not a... nice poem actually luwi
Some are born critics and they don't know how to appreciate other's good work. They count holes rather than taking the good aspects in each work. A very good poem you have written here.
Yes, I totally agree with the last two verses....But i will tell you something, may be the people who say ' Oh this poem is great..' and they don't like it, perhaps they say so because they don't want to hurt the poet's feeling but they say it once -in only one poem, not in every poem-..when they say so on the all poems this is called HYPOCRISY! ! .......nice message...10
it's about time someone said something about that subject, really good poem, i totally agree with Kranthi, what he said said is soo true, thanks for sharing, it was a pleasure to read! ! ! ! (10)
Once I had read and recorded it in my handbook...'I can't judge any of you. I have no malice against you and no ribbons for you. But I think that it is high time that you all start looking at yourselves, and judging the lie that you live in.'
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
wow...that is so true..i likes it...i thought it was funny..thanks for sharing