.. Font Color= Blue Fake Comments Poem by Eyan Desir

.. Font Color= Blue Fake Comments

Rating: 2.6

Painting beautiful words
On an ugly portrait
Does not make the dust
Under a carpet disappear

Giving a frog fresh roses
Will make him elated
Spill the truth and break his heart

It's a good cause of pain
That removes wax in an eye

Correcting your seeds
Means it will blossom
Into a brilliant plant
Giving fake comments...

Makes! terrible poets.

Slade Oriley 14 November 2009

That is truly deep. Honesty is the best policy. Being lied to can hurt worse than the truth on a matter. This is a great work. Keep writing

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Ala Elouri 14 November 2009

OMG! What ur saying is so true! :) Dude, ur great and keep that up. and ahmm, this is not a fake comment :) ! LOL :) : D

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Tiffany Channell 14 November 2009

So true. keep it up God bless.

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Sivashanmugam Shanmugam 14 November 2009

''Giving a frog fresh roses will make him elated. Spill the truth and break his heart...'' The line reflects the poet's(your's) feelings. We can understand that you are deprived not only by this fake comments, but also these proxy ppls.

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Catrina Heart 16 November 2009

Painting beautiful words On an ugly portrait Does not make the dust Under a carpet disappear ----- great metaphors used........fake comments have either ways of....... feeding the pride to inspire and continue to work hard or......... make false belief and the pride fed is as egocentric.........

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Janell Cressman 18 December 2009

it's about time someone said something about that subject, really good poem, i totally agree with Kranthi, what he said said is soo true, thanks for sharing, it was a pleasure to read! ! ! ! (10)

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Sharnae Green 17 December 2009

the realist ive read yet

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Ray Telcy 26 November 2009

my fav, i really like this

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Nikunj Sharma 19 November 2009

Couldn't agree more...its a great poem.....keep it up

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Kranthi Pothineni 19 November 2009

Once I had read and recorded it in my handbook...'I can't judge any of you. I have no malice against you and no ribbons for you. But I think that it is high time that you all start looking at yourselves, and judging the lie that you live in.'

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