Painting beautiful words
On an ugly portrait
Does not make the dust
Under a carpet disappear
Giving a frog fresh roses
Will make him elated
Spill the truth and break his heart
It's a good cause of pain
That removes wax in an eye
Correcting your seeds
Means it will blossom
Into a brilliant plant
Giving fake comments...
Makes! terrible poets.
OMG! What ur saying is so true! :) Dude, ur great and keep that up. and ahmm, this is not a fake comment :) ! LOL :) : D
''Giving a frog fresh roses will make him elated. Spill the truth and break his heart...'' The line reflects the poet's(your's) feelings. We can understand that you are deprived not only by this fake comments, but also these proxy ppls.
Painting beautiful words On an ugly portrait Does not make the dust Under a carpet disappear ----- great metaphors used........fake comments have either ways of....... feeding the pride to inspire and continue to work hard or......... make false belief and the pride fed is as egocentric.........
it's about time someone said something about that subject, really good poem, i totally agree with Kranthi, what he said said is soo true, thanks for sharing, it was a pleasure to read! ! ! ! (10)
Once I had read and recorded it in my handbook...'I can't judge any of you. I have no malice against you and no ribbons for you. But I think that it is high time that you all start looking at yourselves, and judging the lie that you live in.'
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
That is truly deep. Honesty is the best policy. Being lied to can hurt worse than the truth on a matter. This is a great work. Keep writing