Fool's Gold Poem by LeeAnn Azzopardi

Fool's Gold

Rating: 5.0


Let yr soul become golden
Among the silver around you
And as the brighten shine
Comes through yr eyes
And never shed a tear
If you do, yr soul will become
Brass

Saturday, August 28, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: hope
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 28 August 2021

A beautiful poem......Bravooooo!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 August 2021

Life has many colors. It is in our hearts if we can make it gold. Wonderful poetic expressions cleverly crafted.

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Rob Lamberton 17 January 2023

Fool's Gold… for me I'd like to think it's the fool's gold that never allows a tear. Maybe that's because I've done my share of crying!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 30 August 2021

So meaningful and beautifully expressed.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 August 2021

Created in crystal clear colours so cleverly put in cool and cute composition, beautful, dear LeeAnn! I have enjoyed the sweet tunes in this Song! 5 Stars full

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M Asim Nehal 30 August 2021

Magistic! ! ! ! Loved it.5*****

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Cowboy Ron Williams 28 August 2021

Gold, silver, brass... I like to feel your spirit as you share your deep thoughts in poetry.

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