I shall compose a Song for thee
a loveliest Song of my Heart
each day I will do the best part
to feel the least suppressed me
about the birds, bees and the butterlies
about knowledge, honesty, but never about lies
about hope, happiness, love and peace
then each night we'll go asleep with ease
never run, never hate and never compete
no competitions with your beloved one
just telling truths of the day, none obsolete
you will feel sweet emotions as the day has gone
Why cannot we just respect and appreciate each other
why must you constantly be best than the better?
God sees upon you and instantly He sends thunder
this blister fires at you as the long lost letter
Let's create in this greatest poetry home
where we all live beneath one dome
no one is the best or the winner
we all are respected, loved, and admired,
in this stage of art, no one should be the sinner....
©SYLVIA FRANCES CHAN
A.D. Friday the 5th of April 2019-
12.34 hrs. P.M. West-Euripean Time
A tender heart always feels the every wave of God with goodness of emotion and sings the song of glory of God for his wonderful creation. Perceiving this nature with greater possibilities we should perceive God and strengthen beauty of life. All values like, love, honesty, peace and happiness and many more human values we can inherit by his grace. This is an outstanding poem very nicely and beautifully penned.10
Dear Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir, I thank you so much for your generous comments, your precious visit I always appreciate and respect, your impressing compliments based upon God's love I constantly feel blessed, you are non-comparable, Sir. Thank you for the 10.
Fabulous! Beautifully felt and grandiose! We and the World, As it should be A impeccable poem, That lets us hope That one day, So it shall be, And not just A wonderful Poet's Fantasy. A magnificent, universal poem, endless in good feelings and time.
Let's create in this greatest poetry home where we all live beneath one dome. Excellent rhyme and beautiful lines.
In the second stanza, the first line: about the birds, bees and the butterliesThis must be of course Butterflies, thank you
Too good and well realized write....said all is true and Truth only...highly applaudable...top score
All lines are highly philosophical.To sleep with ease and never run, hate lines are really to be followed in every body's life.Well crafted Ma'am.
A great poem with powerful insight. A poetic gem. To my Poem List.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
As poets we all belong to one world family of Poetry! Your ideas of this poem is good for all to assimilate and be so! A nice composition to read!
Dear Ramesh, wonderful to see you, your precious visit most appreciated and by your marvelous comments I feel so blessed. Thank you for your lovely words, feel me blessed.