For The New Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

For The New

Rating: 4.9


For the new
on the rolling earth
The adventurous mind
Yes, I need

On the lazy piece of white paper
The pen is paralyzed patient

Need to travel me
To cure my pen

I like to travel
but without arriving anywhere

Because of the pen of poetry
does not know how to stop

Nowadays
Justice
Truth
Right-wrong
Religions
Political throne
Constitution
Judge
Scale of punishment
all live in the woody armpit of savage power!

The adventurous mind of the pen
comes out from the prevalent dark den
without fixing any trend
to enjoy all thru wisdom shower
for the new independent intuition seeker


02.11.2020 Chattogram

Wednesday, November 4, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: independent,pen
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 07 November 2020

'Need to travel me To cure my pen' this reminded me, pens do travel, signing documents, treaties, creating war or peace, pens can travel too far when signing ill advised documents 'The flash of the president’s pen deals with the life of men. Starting a war settling a score all happens so far away.' this reminded me of the poem 'Moment In Time', sometimes powerful people need to think for more than a moment hours days about consequences

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Bernard F. Asuncion 05 November 2020

A well crafted poem.... Truly magnificent and brilliant...5 stars*****

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o poet me poet yeps poet 05 November 2020

Because of the pen of poetry does not know how to stop excellent mb

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Varsha M 04 November 2020

The adventurous mind of the pen comes out from the prevalent dark den without fixing any trend to enjoy all thru wisdom shower for the new independent intuition seeker.....yes beautiful words in ode to pen. Indeed pen is that way only just serving the purpose.

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Khairul Ahsan 04 November 2020

'I like to travel but without arriving anywhere Because of the pen of poetry does not know how to stop' - When a poet's pen stops, he lives no more. A poet has a myriad of destinations, yet he arrives 'nowhere'!

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Anjandev Roy 29 August 2022

Excellent piece........thank u dear friend....

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BRITTE NINAD 28 February 2021

But I like your open hearted greetings to all

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BRITTE NINAD 28 February 2021

All new welcome to the the dimension of your ultra platform of love!

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Mac Che 25 January 2021

about the independent poetic writing this poem is alsoe good expressing.........God bless you

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Terry Craddock 20 November 2020

I wrote the poem 'The Pen Is Stationary The Pen Looks Innocent', inspired by the poem 'For The New', by the poet MAHTAB BANGALEE; with quotations from the poem, 'Moment In Time*', by the poet Terence George Craddock.

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