Forever Poem by shiny shine

Forever

Rating: 5.0


It feels like forever since we have talked like friends
Why did our friendship fall apart?
To me it remains unknown

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

We always wonder y out of no where freindships just fall apart...i guess we will never no

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Jessica Caswell 17 May 2009

simple but strong... great job! ! !

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Lacie Wasserman 10 June 2009

Wow short but really good it takes 2 to make a relationship of anykind and maybe one of you just didnt care enough to hodl it together anymore

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Eyan Desir 24 January 2010

We cant live forever Only God lives that long SO bonds must come to a end sometime..

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Ryan Thompson 11 January 2010

short and insightful but look for the answer in your self don't wait for this guy to tell you why cuz you dont deserve to be hung out to dry

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forever is worded in love, friendship and even life but it's takes dedication to proceed it into that path but you know how reality works now and days too many restrictions and limits your abilities to keep that bond...wonderful poem short but open thought processes 10/10

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Antonio Liao 28 July 2009

as reality fall...the missing link started to show...as it grow... i realize and fall again but with caution.....your a cleaver poet....i like your style....to naive yet! compiling...so vague nay! it’s superficial...a true poem i consider....honest as it goes...thank you for sharing...God bless a 10 +++++

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Lady Grace 14 June 2009

good poem..brief and expressive..grace

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