You should recognize
that a lover here lies
he says he wasn`t killed
that`s the truth he denies
saying love didn`t kill me
to himself he lies
while covered with mud
like a river he cries
Eaten up inside his soul
as u went with other guys
said coughing all the dust
our love will never rise
after u sold your love
to the first who buys
i hope as u realize
that true love with me dies
you will memorize
that look on my eyes
when you cheated on me
and when no body cared
that me here lies
'...sold your love/to the first who buys'. This line says so much. Bittersweet. t x
a poetry i can relate to........ i'm short of words for your work... keep writing....
the title should have been the unforgettable forgotten lover.....
very very nice every body have 2 feel pain if they had loved some one and been chated i felt ur feeling..... gud jop
Unique way to attack with words the situation you depict in your poem which has happened worldwide no doubt written with finess++++10
maann..awesum! ! ! >.....thts all i can..say! ! >.........i jus luvv ...
That was amazing, and full of deep emotion.& by the way, you thought im studying english literature =], im still in prep stage @ skool. 10! !
full of emotions....i feel the pain....written from heart that's full of love inspite of the heartaches that love have caused...very touching...! 0+++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
oh love how difficult you are.unfortunately you won't see love without a lie.it is too far......strong emotions this poem have.. i like it too much..