Fortress Poem by LeeAnn Azzopardi

Fortress

Rating: 5.0


I can't understand why I continue to suffer
My heart is depleted from years of mourning
But I remain sorrowful
I guess it's the Catholic in me
As I am told that we suffer for the sin we did
Because we're weak
And G-d will comfort us in a time of need
I need you, G-d
I need yr arms wrapped around my heart
Like a fortress
My life is going nowhere
And I don't want to continue
Aimlessly, I watch others love and fight
And wonder if this is correct?
But I can tell you one thing G-d
Loneliness is a bitch

Wednesday, June 7, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: god,loneliness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jayne Louise Davies 07 June 2023

Heartfelt words LeeAnn x Top marks *****

1 0 Reply
Anjandev Roy 07 June 2023

Simply brilliant..... thanks for sharing this poem with us....

1 0 Reply
M. Asim Nehal 07 June 2023

We all with some purpose here, may be you are here to explore loneliness and write about it as you are doing. Nice poem LeeAnn, look around you will see all beautiful things.

0 0 Reply
Rajan T Renganathan 07 June 2023

Loneliness creates fortress around and we feel trapped in it. Brilliant poem.

0 0 Reply
Poetic Sky 07 June 2023

Painful and pathetic - you said it about loneliness - Perfect poem *****

0 0 Reply
M.J. Lemon 10 June 2023

A truly powerful verse, LeeAnn. This goes to myfavourites.

0 0 Reply
Nabakishore Dash 09 June 2023

G-d would extend his hands around your sincere heart definitely.

0 0 Reply
Ruta Mohapatra 08 June 2023

You are right, LeeAnn, loneliness is hard to bear...

0 0 Reply
S H 08 June 2023

You are at least with Ghost. Nice poem. Full ****

0 0 Reply
Juhaina Tumlu 08 June 2023

God is merciful and listens to us, you will get your companion soon Cheer. Full Stars.

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success