Fortress Poem by LeeAnn Azzopardi


Rating: 5.0

I can't understand why I continue to suffer
My heart is depleted from years of mourning
But I remain sorrowful
I guess it's the Catholic in me
As I am told that we suffer for the sin we did
Because we're weak
And G-d will comfort us in a time of need
I need you, G-d
I need yr arms wrapped around my heart
Like a fortress
My life is going nowhere
And I don't want to continue
Aimlessly, I watch others love and fight
And wonder if this is correct?
But I can tell you one thing G-d
Loneliness is a bitch

Wednesday, June 7, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: god,loneliness
Anjandev Roy 07 June 2023

Simply brilliant..... thanks for sharing this poem with us....

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Jayne Louise Davies 07 June 2023

Heartfelt words LeeAnn x Top marks *****

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Very very true, LeeAnn. Loneliness gnaws at your very being… awesome poetry.5*

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Nosheen Irfan 08 June 2023

Coming straight from the heart and going straight to the heart of the reader. Straight forward and honest. Bravo! Full marks!

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David Wood 07 June 2023

Very heartfelt words LeeAnn but your canine loves you and you love him, and sometimes that takes the pain of loneliness away.

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M.J. Lemon 10 June 2023

A truly powerful verse, LeeAnn. This goes to myfavourites.

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Nabakishore Dash 09 June 2023

G-d would extend his hands around your sincere heart definitely.

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Ruta Mohapatra 08 June 2023

You are right, LeeAnn, loneliness is hard to bear...

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S H 08 June 2023

You are at least with Ghost. Nice poem. Full ****

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Juhaina Tumlu 08 June 2023

God is merciful and listens to us, you will get your companion soon Cheer. Full Stars.

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