Friends, Love, Life Poem by Kelvin Owusu

Friends, Love, Life

Rating: 4.2


In all honesty, you are beautiful
Despite the backlash
Between the mind and that beating drum
Slipped, tripped, fell in
That four letter word
Caved in,
A world of a word which I don't understand
A dramatic change of feelings
Agonizing pain of lovely memories
A friendship changed,
Through the cause of one word
Between two others

To say she's beautiful
Is an understatement
She's beyond a bond
My life's blood
Resonates through her veins
The combination of hers and mine
One, breath of her breath
A life created by tango
Two, a strong kick, healthy
A joy, shown through a teary smile
Not heaven sent but heaven itself

Monday, October 29, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: honesty
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ellias Anderson Jr. 31 October 2012

Friends all over the world....yeah, it's also strange for me(I mean the lines: A dramatic change of feelings Agonizing pain of lovely memories A friendship changed, Through the cause of one word Between two others Still it's a mystery for me that how a word can ruin a relation between two friends those were close to each other for years? a great work well done

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Stevie Taite 29 October 2012

Kevin, this may be my favourite so far! Especially the last stanza! The discovery of your new felt bond, and joy described beautifully. Perfect!

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Anita Sehgal 30 October 2012

a lovely piece... a joy!

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 30 October 2012

beautiful poem in which the heaven felt!

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Stevens Cadet 07 January 2013

Love the painted picture in this one. Continue shining light on this world

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 10 November 2012

Nice way of putting that one loves is like being confronted with heaven itself. Nice way of putting this idea across. Great lines.

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Aung Si 01 November 2012

very nice poem! beautifully written! keep it up! my vote is 7.Enjoyed it

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Aung Si 01 November 2012

very nice poem! beautifully written! keep it up! :)

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Nader Baheri 31 October 2012

real or the true lovers are the ones who their souls have joined together in a body.and can not be fallen apart by words. nicely piece of written.10+++++

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