When the sun rose bright and high in the sky,
It looked around with its far-reaching eyes,
To spread its radiant light with flamboyance,
To bestow its colourful energy with benevolence.
The Sun looked down and spotted the Earth,
This is the place he decided to bestow with mirth!
The Earth stood with her arms thrown open and wide,
To embrace the rays of light with genuine warmth!
The Sun sent its brilliant rays - Not just
To the surface of the earth with trees and flowers,
But it penetrated deep down inside the earth,
To discover stones hidden deep down in darkness.
The stones woke up with the illuminating rays of light,
They vibrated and whistled a tune with delight,
They rolled with joy to be able to light and reflect,
They danced with happiness as they could heal and brighten!
o spread its radiant light with flamboyance, To bestow its colourful energy with benevolence. lovely sunny picture with such a beautiful sunny picture
The Sun looked down and spotted the Earth, This is the place he decided to bestow with mirth! The Earth stood with her arms thrown open and wide, To embrace the rays of light with genuine warmth! Dear Poetess nGita, this is a lovely poem. sun, earth, falling in love embracing the ray of light. imagination that ends in geuine warmth. tony
A good start with a bright theme...the whole poem is rich with fact and rhyme...indeed a good attempt at gems with a good description about how they are found and how they get their sunny beauty....inspiring informative poem....10/10
Exquisitely wonderful. The poem creates images of infinite beauty and also deals with conditions leading to the formation of gemstones under the crust of earth. Thanks for its unique poetic presentation.
When the earth welcomes and hugs the the genuine warmth of the sun it's energy penetrates to the depths and wakes up the sleeping gems. A wonderful imagery....10
beautiful poem penned on the earth; yeah the earth is the superb safety lap of mother; its sun, its moon, its days and night, its rivers, its seasons, its forests, its mountains, its stones and mud, its all animals are supplementary each for others////
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Sun's highness and beauty both grow with dignified duty. Sun rises with glorious activity to serve humanity. Sun spreads radiant light and beauty is brought up with interesting measurement. The vibrating delight motivates mind and we feel the essence of fabulous perception. Thank you very much for sharing this lovely work...10