Ghazal English - Let Us Review Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Ghazal English - Let Us Review

Rating: 5.0

Come, let's refresh our promises
Or else it will scatter like petals from a flower

You were never mine, nor to be or will be
You are part of me like a soul in my body

You are always playing with my sentiments
Like throwing a pigeon in the air

And you performed those rituals as if
You are trying to extinguish the burning grazers

You stayed with me during our intimacy.
Like the arrival and departure of the weather

Now I am afraid to think about you 'MAN'
Since you're trying to fight this internal battle with self.

Wednesday, January 13, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: mystical philosophy
Suresh Kumar EK 14 January 2021

You are great in Ghazals AsimJi

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 27 February 2022

Thanks much SureshJi

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Kostas Lagos 14 January 2021

Splendid! Five stars

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 14 January 2021

Such a fine Ghazal. Soul stirring poem. Thank you Asim ji.5 stars

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 January 2021

A powerful and very thought provoking poem. Full of great images. Beautifully written.

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S H 15 January 2021

Superb ghazal. I liked the flow.

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Shreya Hacks 15 January 2021

Very well thought couplets

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Deepak S S 14 January 2021

I love your ghazals they are ❤ touching and ming blowing

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Darren Jkoeryo 14 January 2021

DJ liked your ghazal. Every couplet is marvelous.

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Sharad Bhatia 14 January 2021

Really beautiful and heart touching ghazal. Thankyou for sharing such a beautiful Ghazal. Rating 1000++++****

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