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Rating: 5.0

Come, let's refresh our promises
Or else it will scatter like petals from a flower

You were never mine, nor to be or will be
You are part of me like a soul in my body

You are always playing with my sentiments
Like throwing a pigeon in the air

And you performed those rituals as if

You are trying to extinguish the burning grazers
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Wednesday, January 13, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: mystical philosophy
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Suresh Kumar EK 14 January 2021

You are great in Ghazals AsimJi

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Kostas Lagos 14 January 2021

Splendid! Five stars

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 14 January 2021

Such a fine Ghazal. Soul stirring poem. Thank you Asim ji.5 stars

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 January 2021

A powerful and very thought provoking poem. Full of great images. Beautifully written.

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Varsha M 13 January 2021

A beautiful description of relationship and life. The part of the soul. Beautiful ghazal.

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S H 15 January 2021

Superb ghazal. I liked the flow.

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Shreya Hacks 15 January 2021

Very well thought couplets

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Deepak S S 14 January 2021

I love your ghazals they are ? touching and ming blowing

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Darren Jkoeryo 14 January 2021

DJ liked your ghazal. Every couplet is marvelous.

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Sharad Bhatia 14 January 2021

Really beautiful and heart touching ghazal. Thankyou for sharing such a beautiful Ghazal. Rating 1000++++****

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