Asif Andalib

Bronze Star - 2,391 Points (27 November 1967 / Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh)

God's Wife And Food - Poem by Asif Andalib

God has a body and light
The universe is inside God's light
And it is actually made of a little bit of saliva of God
God's body cannot break into two pieces
Because of gravitational force
If God's body had double mass than it has now
Then also God could not break Itself into two pieces
Even God can not make enough food for himself
That's why God is a little hungry and thirsty
And upset

Topic(s) of this poem: spiritual


Comments about God's Wife And Food by Asif Andalib

  • (2/17/2013 2:37:00 PM)

    He can't have a wife nor food, therefore He cant break into two pieces. Nice words. (Report)Reply

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  • (10/8/2012 6:08:00 AM)

    well-written, your use of imagery is vivid as well enthralling.. nice poem.. (Report)Reply

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  • (10/3/2012 6:31:00 PM)

    Well written. I love it! It makes me rethink everything in the universe. Everything I know. (Report)Reply

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  • Aung Si (10/2/2012 6:57:00 AM)

    Great! fantastic idea.Our universe is made up of a little bit saliva of God, right? Cheers......., Well done! ! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • (10/1/2012 11:33:00 PM)

    The poem is great being mystical.Well written. (Report)Reply

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  • Okoronkwo Jackson Jonathan (10/1/2012 12:08:00 AM)

    Lines deep in meaning. Well linguistic use. Sounding so abstract but well constructed in meaning. In fact you went metaphysical to prove the omnipotence of God. Good work. (Report)Reply

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  • Romeo Della Valle (9/30/2012 4:02:00 PM)

    Thought provoking! A few powerful words that really can moved the readers and make the mind work harder! God, the Center of the Universe is clearly brought up to the mind of the readers in such an amazing way in this short but well crafted write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City!

    http: //www.romeodellavalle.com (My Visual Poetry webpage)
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  • Cosmic Dreamer (9/30/2012 12:56:00 PM)

    An interesting view... Not a view I personally hold but interesting none the less... A very well written observation... (Report)Reply

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  • Akanksha Bhatt (9/30/2012 10:57:00 AM)

    you know what, my birth day is also on 27th N ovember but its 1998. (Report)Reply

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  • Akanksha Bhatt (9/30/2012 10:56:00 AM)

    ITS REALLY TRUE. NICE ONE. I LIKED IT. (Report)Reply

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  • Sasidharan Vellat Menon (9/30/2012 8:42:00 AM)

    You expressed it beautifully friend. (Report)Reply

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  • Allemagne Roßmann (9/30/2012 8:26:00 AM)

    Scientific poeting hereby...i like the whiff inside it (Report)Reply

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  • Ellias Anderson Jr. (9/30/2012 7:40:00 AM)

    Full of truth and meaningful. a charm rhymes. you ave wrote this poem with the light. well, well...
    Regards.
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  • Udaya R. Tennakoon (9/30/2012 7:07:00 AM)

    nice.. If God's body had double mass than it has now
    It could break Itself into two pieces
    Thus He would have His wife and food
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 30, 2012

Poem Edited: Thursday, March 15, 2018


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