Goodbye Poem by ramesh rai

Goodbye

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War!
good bye, we say
we say you goodbye

we, the people of earth
say you goodbye

we are not to fight
and waste our lives
by your might

we are the obedient children
of the Mother Earth
we are not to shed blood
any more
why not you cry
more and more

we have to land
on moon and mars
we have to touch
the sky high

we have to make this earth
the paradise of heaven
why not you befool us
again and again

we have to capture
the pains of life
we have to make
a delightful life

we have to assasinate
all curse of life
foregoing false pride

so, we say forever
you, goodbye
peace of heaven
will dwell now
days and night

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 29 July 2013

Beautiful Uplifting poem... Good message...

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Yasmin Khan 30 July 2013

an inspiring write, I wish we would be able to say goodbye to inner and outer conflicts.

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 30 July 2013

yeah, we have to make our life better and better without wars still a lot of homework is more important than just fight and show of strength strong words, strong messages and strong poem thanks for sharing

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Patricia Grantham 02 August 2013

War and unrest have been with us since the beginning of time. Peace is never attained without this never ending battle and freedom does not come without a price. Maybe it will come when all began to respect each other as individuals and not just another face with no name. A thoughtful write.

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Heather Wilkins 01 August 2013

war is so unnecessary. if the leaders of all nationals would just come together and decide war will be no more. we will live in this world together as brothers and sisters. and work out our problems. it would be such a happy place for our children and future generations, lovely write

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 31 July 2013

We will hope goodbye to war is welcome to peace. Message looks clear. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Lorraine Colon 31 July 2013

I would learn how to say good-bye in every language in the world if it would mean war would leave forever. Great idea you expressed here!

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Valerie Dohren 30 July 2013

War never achieves anything but destruction. Goodbye to it, yes please Ramesh.

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