Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 399,791 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

Gorgeous Green - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Inside this green forest
Sunbeam has fallen,
A dazzling effect of the day
We clearly notice in smile,
Nature's beam is bloomed,
As grass has grown and
Many grass flowers are swinging,
Deep greenness of the plants
We hold in palm of emotion,
Adhering to the wall of art,
Nature's attractiveness sings,
Attracting sunbeam of midday
Plants are still in melody.

This grassy land of forest
We see and sing for newness,
Each leaf is painted in love
By green pigments of sunbeam,
Beauty's glance enhances chance
As wildflowers have grown,
Trust of eternal movement
Every plant keeps and moves,
Greenness is painted with love,
Goodness is given to nature,
God's greatest garden this is,
Here grass glorifies his name
And plants also glorify God,
Gorgeous green is glorious green!

© Kumarmani Mahakul,08 March 2019. All rights reserved.

Topic(s) of this poem: beauty, nature, perception, philosophical , spiritual

Form: Free Verse


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Cover photo © Kumarmani Mahakul,27, April 2017. All rights reserved.

Comments about Gorgeous Green by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Mahtab Bangalee (3/20/2019 2:11:00 AM)

    great poem on the natural greenery world /// love this poem (Report)Reply

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  • Anil Kumar Panda (3/15/2019 10:43:00 AM)

    A very beautiful poem on the magnificence glory of the nature. It feels soothing reading the poem.
    'We hold in palm of emotion,
    Adhering to the wall of art,
    Nature's attractiveness sings,
    Attracting sunbeam of midday
    Plants are still in melody.'...is such a nice stanza. Nice photo. Thanks for sharing.10+++++
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  • Geeta Radhakrishna Menon (3/12/2019 12:19:00 PM)

    Gorgeous Green is a lovely poem, Kumarmani ji.
    The Grass is green,
    The Leaf is Green,
    Forest is green
    Heart is green too, full of love.....10
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  • (3/12/2019 9:51:00 AM)

    A colourful write of the beauty seen in natures glorious garden hopefully forever seen. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/11/2019 11:22:00 PM)

    Hi, hi, hi darling poet Kumar! I love green scene very much and I love your picture darling poet. Green garden is God's greatest garden. You are very nice like your poem. This deserves full 10 but where is the rating box darling poet? (Report)Reply

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  • (3/11/2019 7:04:00 AM)

    Wow so soothing poem, nicely written...green picture is very fantastic, ,10+ (Report)Reply

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  • (3/11/2019 7:04:00 AM)

    Wow so soothing poem, nicely written...green picture is very fantastic (Report)Reply

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  • (3/11/2019 12:40:00 AM)

    I love green scene very much. Your effort of capturing green picture is very nice and this description motivates us to feel this green creation. This is an interesting poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Aniruddha Pathak (3/11/2019)

    Plants in melody, each leaf painted in love,
    The green giving goodness to nature,
    Beautiful expressions.
    Yes, God's greatest garden is not paradise,
    it is here on earth..
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  • Susan Williams (3/9/2019 4:55:00 PM)

    Each leaf is painted in love
    By green pigments of sunbeam, - - - > Nicely done blend of scientific fact and gorgeous poetry! ! ! Enjoyed this read immensely! ! !
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  • Rose Marie Juan-austin (3/9/2019 3:12:00 PM)

    Liked the title of this marvelous poem.
    And the whole write has been paved with gorgeous green
    depicting a lovely and.lively day.
    Nature at its very best.
    God at its ultimate Holiness.
    Beautifully written.
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  • Rose Marie Juan-austin (3/9/2019 3:03:00 PM)

    Green color symbolizes life, renewal,
    energy, growth and nature.
    And life itself and nature are given by God.
    These premises have been embodied in this
    wonderful and brilliant poem.
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  • Khairul Ahsan (3/9/2019 9:23:00 AM)

    Loved the comments of Valsa George and Aqua Flower. Thanks to both! (Report)Reply

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  • Khairul Ahsan (3/9/2019 9:10:00 AM)

    A soul soothing poem and an eye soothing picture, wonderfully juxtaposed!
    'Each leaf is painted in love
    By green pigments of sunbeam' - a beautiful thought, to which I cannot but agree!
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  • Aqua Flower (3/9/2019 8:47:00 AM)

    Your perception of life brings life to me! Wonderfully written! 10 (Report)Reply

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  • Prabir Gayen (3/9/2019 8:12:00 AM)

    10000000000+++++++++++++++++++++++++ vote (Report)Reply

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  • Prabir Gayen (3/9/2019 8:12:00 AM)

    God's greatest garden this is,
    Here grass glorifies his name
    And plants also glorify God,
    Gorgeous green is glorious green!
    Like William wordsworth...great line of devotion..fleeting glimpse of eternity....thanks
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  • Prabir Gayen (3/9/2019 8:10:00 AM)

    This grassy land of forest
    We see and sing for newness,
    Each leaf is painted in love
    By green pigments of sunbeam,
    Beauty's glance enhances chance
    As wildflowers have grown,
    Trust of eternal movement...
    Becoming classical poem...sweet
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  • Prabir Gayen (3/9/2019 8:09:00 AM)

    Nature's beam is bloomed,
    As grass has grown and
    Many grass flowers are swinging,
    Deep greenness of the plants
    We hold in palm of emotion,
    Adhering to the wall of art,
    Nature's attractiveness sings,
    Attracting sunbeam of midday
    Plants are still in melody...
    Deep visual image
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  • Prabir Gayen (3/9/2019 8:08:00 AM)

    Inside this green forest
    Sunbeam has fallen,
    A dazzling effect of the day
    We clearly notice in smile,
    Nature's beam is bloomed, ...
    Beautiful line from a Nature poet.
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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 8, 2019

Poem Edited: Monday, March 11, 2019


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