Bri Edwards

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H A P P Y .......-Machine!…[ Very Short; Fantasy ] - Poem by Bri Edwards

A "Happy Machine" is what we, the human species, does need.
I don't mean a pipe for smoking some stinky dried weed, ….
but a fantastic "magic box" which can take any person's frown
AND, with a bit of "hocus-pocus"*, change it to the smile…..
of A Happy Clown!


(January …..7 ….2018)

* hocus-pocus: a form of words often used by a person performing magic tricks.

Topic(s) of this poem: happiness, magic, smiling


Poet's Notes about The Poem

the product of boredom!bri ;)

Comments about H A P P Y .......-Machine!…[ Very Short; Fantasy ] by Bri Edwards

  • Madhabi Banerjee (8/28/2018 6:54:00 AM)

    A COMEDY CLOWN. GOOD. THANK YOU. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/23/2018 12:44:00 AM)

    That machine is you, Bri. (Report)Reply

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  • Bharati Nayak (1/17/2018 6:55:00 PM)

    - - - - - - - and that would be the most wonderful machine, the most sought after machine - - - for who would not like his frowns to be taken away leaving his facial skin smooth ? ? Enjoyed the poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Bharati Nayak (1/17/2018 6:54:00 PM)

    - - - - - - - and that would be the most wonderful machine, the most sought after machine r- - - for who would not like his frowns to be taken away leaving his facial skin smooth ? ? Enjoyed the poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Dr Dillip K Swain (1/15/2018 5:20:00 AM)

    …..a fantastic magic box…. with a bit of hocus-pocus…………Enjoyed the humor! ………..10 (Report)Reply

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  • Muzahidul Reza (1/14/2018 4:21:00 PM)

    If machines are happy the users also happy yet sometimes they feel tired with the machines for unknown causes,
    Excellently penned, thanks for sharing the poem with us,10
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 14, 2018



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