Haiku-1 Poem by Aarzoo Mehek

Haiku-1

Rating: 5.0


You and me
Immeasurable love
A far off dream.

© Aarzoo Mehek

Haiku-1
Tuesday, September 22, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: dream,haiku,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 22 September 2020

A far off dream Often merge in tiny glass Me and you together..... Just playing with your words ma'am.

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M Asim Nehal 22 September 2020

Masha Allah, If we get such love in reality, then what is the requirement of dream? ? ? Awesome Haiku...5***

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Mahtab Bangalee 22 September 2020

you-me equal we from the nature loving boon heaven is our life////

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Khairul Ahsan 22 September 2020

An excellent haiku, liked it very much!

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Deluke Muwanigwa 22 September 2020

Nice. This one i understand. Give it more time. It will happen. If it doesnt move on.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 October 2023

A lovely haiku.. beautiful. Top score

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Immeasurable love. Top grading

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Rajnish Manga 22 September 2020

It's strange that they have removed this provision of MyPoemList. Let it be. My admiration stays.

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Rajnish Manga 22 September 2020

This is one of the best poem read by me for a long time. It retains the spirit of an Haiku. Thanks a lot. It goes into MyPoemList.

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Rajnish Manga 22 September 2020

No harm in dreaming but be watchful of nightmares. Or it may lead to the battle of wits. Thanks.

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