freedom breezes in
when you throw out the evil
trapped in your own thoughts
Fantastic Senryu. Yes of course we keep our selves trapped in our own thoughts.5***
Evil thoughts caged in our mind deter us to enjoy the wonders of existence..A poem of great impact. To my Poem List.
Best thoughts ever for enlightened behavior. your kindness, goodness and wisdom, shine thru in this lovely Haiku.
That's so cute and meaningful. It calls for introspection and correction at our end before we point fingers at others. Thanks, Geeta Ma'am.
So much thought and wisdom in just three simple lines. Fantastic!
The ultimate freed! Liberated from the internal fears and doubts that confine us
Freedom matters a lot. Freedom signifies the beauty of inner core. Freedom strengthen life and takes towards victory. This is definitely very valuable poem.
The free air moves if it finds a room with open windows...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Lovely Haiku Geeta. Meditation helps too.