Winter mist covers hills
Earth rises to warm sunshine
Dreamy in blanket
Dreamy in blanket... little writes reveal more. It is a nice haiku on winter. Thanks for sharing.
This haiku is well-constructed...your best attempt so far. It does two things at once: 1) concisely presents a scene; 2) sums up an unfolding event. The sleeper savors the last half-waking moments before the day's hurly burly begins. In the time before waking we entertain fanciful notions. This haiku makes me wonder what kind of dreams the land has? If we put ourselves in the land's place, what dreams would we have?
Wow- -Many thanks poet Denis Mair for your lovely comment.It makes me to wonder about earth's dream- -Had I been in earth's place, what would have been my dream ! ! Perhaps I would have dreamt all my land is full of greeneries, beautiful and sweet scenting flowers covering the branches, my sky blue, rivers gurgle happily and all animals and birds live happily without enemity.
Winter mist covers hills Earth rises to warm sunshine A beautiful haiku.Thank you for sharing this poem 10+++++
A beautiful haiku giving the warm touch of a velvety blanket on the winter heart of a reader. Thanks for the sharing. Regards. Subhas
Bharati! Your delicate touch is so evident in this lovely lovely Haiku! Dreamy in blanket indeed! ! ! Your pen is so perfect, my dear Bharati, it paints images so deftly so perfectly! 10+++++++++++++ Onto my fav list!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
We don't have winter here but it is so dreamy under a blanket on a cold morning. Your lovely haiku can be felt anywhere. Thanks for sharing.