Haiku-8 Poem by Bharati Nayak

Haiku-8

Rating: 5.0


Green waves on fields
Smile on the farmer's face
A black cloud thunders.

Friday, March 31, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku,rainy season
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Loke Kok Yee 01 July 2017

Rain at the right time bring smiles to everyone's faces. To farmers' it's a blessing. Nice Haiku

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Resh Kav 04 July 2017

a rain drop is the real fuel for farmer. good haiku

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Edward Kofi Louis 31 March 2017

Smile on the farmer's face! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 March 2017

Beautiful haiku on rainy season shared. Farmers smile having looking green waves. Thanks.

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Spock The Vegan 31 March 2017

Thank you for the images created by your Haikus.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 January 2018

Loved reading this beautiful Haiku.....Green waves on fields/Smile on the farmer's face...Thanks for sharing!

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Glen Kappy 21 December 2017

Visitiing your poems I came on this one again. The three pictures in it touch off delight in me. Living in a high desert environment I definitely relate to the farmer and the promise of rain. If you haven’t read them already, you might enjoy my poems Fat Clouds, a Prayer, Rain Prayer, and one about a promise denied, Huge Dark Clouds. Hoping you’re well in all ways, Glen

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Susan Williams 12 December 2017

Loved that addition of the smile on the farmer's face- -around here a farmer might tear his hair out of his head to see rain clouds barreling toward his unharvested crop! You really have a way with Haiku 10

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 12 December 2017

Smile on the farmer's face so nice haiku10±++++++++++(+

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 December 2017

A great depiction of a farmer's ecstasy through this beautiful Haiku! I loved this precise piece of poetry! Thanks dear madam for sharing.....10

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