Haiku. Cut Pomgranate Poem by Valsa George

Haiku. Cut Pomgranate

Rating: 5.0


Ripped belly
With ruby marbles
Strewn on the floor

Thursday, July 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jayatissa K. Liyanage 16 July 2015

Mouth wetting for the sweet juicy berries inside, just like your poems. Thanks for sharing.

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Good one! Yes, pomegranate Is nature's cute treasure trove Of sparkling rubies

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Hazel Durham 20 July 2015

Taste buds stimulated with a succulent cut pomegranate with words to savour and relish!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 21 July 2015

Juicy rubies indeed. So delicious.

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Khalida Bano Ali 30 July 2015

Beautiful three liner................................

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Soran M. H 03 August 2020

** Ripped belly ** Amazing phrase and wonderful analogy

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Soran M. H 03 August 2020

A rare and excellent poetic description, and if the pomegranate was not mentioned in the title, it would not be easy for readers to know the purpose of the content.. Excellent our expert poet 10/10

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Aniruddha Pathak 03 January 2020

What an apt way of putting it, a lovely haiku on poms.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 July 2019

A wonderful Haiku dear madam......loved reading this cute little work in its brevity..........................10

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Akhtar Jawad 04 November 2017

Beauty, supplemented by a tasty flavor, like a beautiful woman with love in her heart. A sweet and lovely haiku.

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