Valsa George

Haiku- Harmony - Poem by Valsa George

What concord we see
In the Earth and the ocean,
Sleeping in embrace

Topic(s) of this poem: haiku

Comments about Haiku- Harmony by Valsa George

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/27/2017 12:38:00 PM)

    Concord is possible among earth and ocean. Insightful presentation astutely done. Beautiful haiku. (Report) Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad (2/7/2016 9:29:00 PM)

    The earth and ocean never meet,
    but when modelling for the artists,
    they show a beautiful harmony.
    And when a poet sees them embracing,
    he is inspired and he is amazing.
    Could I convince the fighting enemies,
    show harmony for the sake of your children,
    the lovely artists and poets of the future.
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  • Hazel Durham (2/7/2016 10:52:00 AM)

    Stunning write, you paint such a serene and beautiful picture with the beauty of your words! (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (2/7/2016 3:17:00 AM)

    With the muse of love and the aroma of nature. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Nosheen Irfan (2/1/2016 2:48:00 AM)

    Concord and harmony add to the beauty of this world. We see many signs of harmonious union in the Nature. You have expressed it well...spirit of harmony is what keeps this world intact. (Report) Reply

  • (2/1/2016 1:17:00 AM)

    Earth and ocean brought together in harmony in a sleeping embrace, both of one accord, allowing each to be what they are, a melody, a symphony, of peaceful acceptance. Lovely Haiku, Valsa. Love it! 10+ Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (1/28/2016 4:46:00 PM)

    That embrace is eternal concord indeed. Beautifully expressed in the poem. (Report) Reply

  • Souren Mondal (1/28/2016 7:32:00 AM)

    I was re-reading William Blake's 'Marriage of Heaven and Hell' where he writes one of my favourite lines in all literature - 'Without contraries is no progression'.. Here is something that is (if not entirely) contradictory and yet in 'concord' - the earth and the sea (water) - two of the five elements are seen in agreement to live peacefully, and thus there is a harmony. If this agreement is broken, then the water can hit the earth and break it.
    Maybe it is about human beings and the contradictory virtues we have - let us take something like good and evil - there is no denying that both exist in us all, but as long there is a right concord between them, there is harmony, once that is broken, we lose our peace of mind. Beautiful haiku Valsa ma'am. Thorougholy enjoyable :)
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    Valsa George (1/28/2016 10:28:00 PM)

    Beautiful analysis! Thank you Souren!

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 28, 2016

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