Haiku On Haiku (5-7-5) Poem by Valsa George

Haiku On Haiku (5-7-5)

Rating: 5.0


A smudge of black ink
On a white sheet of paper
Difficult to scrub

Thursday, July 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A Permanent Marker of the Silent Word...Matsu Basho would have reveled in your concept, Valsa, I'm certain! ~FjR~

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Good. Here is my embellishment in a haiku: Smudges are often Beautiful when they describe Thoughts hidden in pens

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Hazel Durham 20 July 2015

Lovely write expressing the desire to write and to be heard is a passion that can't be erased!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 21 July 2015

The marks of ink remaining for generations to come. Beautifully said. Thank you.

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Patricia Grantham 22 July 2015

Good thoughts of ink on paper. Can never be erased from our minds. Sweet write.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 August 2019

I am delighted to read this amazing haiku on haiku dear madam! Thanks for sharing............................10

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Aniruddha Pathak 28 December 2018

Or stroke on keyboard A whim striking in the mind Not hard to erase. Look at the tweets and words of wisdom on social media. The fact of life then and now. I liked your Haiku.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 May 2018

Here I think heart is th white paper and mind is the pen in which the stain on heart can't be erased. A beautiful haiku has been shared by you astutely. Thanks for sharing.

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Savita Tyagi 12 February 2016

This reminded me of Kabir bani. So much wisdom in few words.

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True saying my friend. It is a fact of life that it is easier to stain than to clean!

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