Haiku ~ Nature's Hygiene Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Haiku ~ Nature's Hygiene

Rating: 5.0


Torrential downpour
cleansing the world with its might
nature's cleansing power

Sunday, July 9, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku,nature,cleaning
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Cleanliness is everyone's duty to enhance nature's beauty. Nature has engineered surfaces like leaves or skins that are capable of interacting with water droplets in different ways.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 09 July 2023

Your Poet's Notes are a bit unclear (for me) in their/its message, but the Haiku is very clear in its meaning (for me) . And I believe it matches well what I once read descibing a Haiku: No complete sentences, a nature-related topic, and 3 lines, no more nor less. And maybe NO rhyming. : )

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Bri Edwards 09 July 2023

I gave 5 stars, AND I saved a lot of my VERY VALUABLE TIME by picking a SHORT poem to try to tear apart. I MEANT to comment on aka 'on which to leave comments'. ;)

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Clean the world with rain - most healing and inspring.......10

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 10 July 2023

beautiful haiku tfs Asim

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Nabakishore Dash 10 July 2023

Torrential downpour, deadly hurricane and pinching. heat of sun are all cleansing the earth Dr Nehal.

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Nature teaches us hygiene by example.. nice poem

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Rajan T Renganathan 10 July 2023

Great imagery in your haiku.

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Poetic Sky 10 July 2023

Nature is awesome in all it's forms.

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Sheeya Hacks 10 July 2023

Fabulous Haiku, least to say.

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Torrential rain and the resultant floods are the nature's cleansing ways. What else can be so effective?

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