Soul to the Body: -
'So how are you, buddy? '
'Not dead yet...'
Haiku #2
Body to the Soul: -
'So return journey when? '
Not again.
Very beautiful..Loved reading it. I like to Haikus very much, I dont to write much on Haiku..Loved it.
Ha ha. I could not stop laughing after the first haiku. Second one also good. But rest three do not match with first two. I suggest that the haikus are separately uploaded.
Lovely. Lovely. Lovely. Perhaps the Most Original Haiku I have ever read! ! Simply brilliant.
Enjoyed the Haiku without the weight of heavy philosophy. Light as feather!
Ha! , Ha! , Ha! Dr. Pradham this is a very good Haiku. Are you sure this is your first? . Sounds like you have done it for quite awhile. I love it because it really gets you thinking. Lovely and lovely.
so cute, the first three lines with intensity at its peak in the last three lines! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Tapn Kumar. I liked the first haiku the most..