Haiku Series ~ 1 Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Haiku Series ~ 1

Rating: 5.0


under the clear sky
fishes splashing in the lake
life is a struggle ~

butterfly flutters
clouds are floating in clusters
on canvas of life~

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajan Trajan Renganathan 06 December 2022

Two scenes merged perfectly. Twin feast of haikus.

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 06 December 2022

every part of nature is struggling to survive well; nice crafted the theme of struggle in life

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 06 December 2022

Dear Asim ji, so good to see your twin haiku - first thing after i open this site - the canvas of life painted with beautiful and meaningful words. Top score and so happy to see you back Asim ji

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 December 2022

Yes, patches of clouds are in different clusters... small, huge, in different shapes and sizes. Loved the inherent beauty of this magnificent little poem.

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Richard Wlodarski 08 December 2022

Such an exquisite twin haiku! Masterfully written, Dr Nehal!

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Anjandev Roy 07 December 2022

Wonderful....dear friend....

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Sandra Feldman 07 December 2022

Unavoidable truths poetically and beautifully said. Lovely work!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 06 December 2022

Asim i really loved these haikus

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