Haiku Series- Summer Rain Poem by Valsa George

Haiku Series- Summer Rain

Rating: 5.0


Dark clouds gather round
They rush and collide in the sky
Igniting fireworks

Wisps of rain dripping
Dry land sucks it greedily
Belch of steam rises

Plants stand in despair
Like little children in bath,
Forbidden to splash

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The dark clouds presaging a heavy shower alas ended in a drizzle!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Very well done, enjoyed reading.

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Kelly Kurt 24 April 2016

A wonderful series, Valsa. I especially enjoyed the last one and your poet's notes

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Loke Kok Yee 10 May 2016

So well written, I was standing there! Thanks Valsa-10++

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Savita Tyagi 03 May 2016

Lovely rain haiku series. You are my inspiration in this form.

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Simone Inez Harriman 27 April 2016

So descriptively penned and I fell in love with.... 'Plants stand in despair Like little children in bath, Forbidden to splash'

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 October 2020

Plants stand in despair Like little children in bath, Forbidden to splash.....I love this haiku with its theme. Beautiful poems on haiku are presented. Thank you madam for sharing here.

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Aniruddha Pathak 13 September 2019

Lovely three haiku series, especially the last one.

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Dr Antony Theodore 03 December 2018

Wisps of rain dripping Dry land sucks it greedily Belch of steam rises. a very fine imagery. your mind is very imaginative. thank u dear professor. tony

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narayana aghalaya 19 March 2018

nice Haiku poems describing much sought after rain in summer.One can almost feel as if one is physically present and experiencing the drizzle!

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 July 2016

Dry land sucks it greedily! ! Thanks for sharing.

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