Haiku- Sleep (5-7-5) Poem by Valsa George

Haiku- Sleep (5-7-5)

Rating: 5.0


A fresh lily smiled
Under that cool parasol
A ladybird slept

Saturday, October 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roop Rekha Bhaskar 17 October 2015

5-7-5. yet a 10 in total! Few words, yet can speak a page and more. That is the beauty in your writing.

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Loke Kok Yee 17 October 2015

Your words painted a hundred pictures! Soothing Haiku.

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Kelly Kurt 17 October 2015

A truly exceptional haiku. Beautiful

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 18 October 2015

Beautifully said. I can feel the fresh lily smile.

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Hazel Durham 31 October 2015

A serene and comforting scene you have expressed with great panache!

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Aniruddha Pathak 23 September 2019

Beautiful. The ladybird may have slept off, but I woke up with a thousand thoughts.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 July 2019

A fabulous Haiku dear madam! Loved reading it........................................................10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 April 2018

Beautiful inscription on nature has been made concisely. Nice haiku.

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Savita Tyagi 12 February 2016

Love it. So soft and tender. Nature's beauty at its best.

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Simply beautiful..........!

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