Haiku- Winter Poem by Valsa George

Haiku- Winter

Rating: 5.0


Snowflakes keep falling
Like petals of white blossoms
A cheery vast void

Saturday, February 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aarzoo Mehek 06 February 2016

Beautifulllllllllll, I can visualise it. You have way with words. Beautiful haiku my friend.

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Souren Mondal 06 February 2016

Simple, just a plain image of sorts that tickles (if I may use that words) our many senses and makes us feel the warmth that a beautiful description of snow can give. Thank you Valsa ma'am...

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Kelly Kurt 06 February 2016

From southern India, you write of snow as an eyewitness

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 06 February 2016

Touching picture on the poetic canvass. Enjoyed.

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Nosheen Irfan 06 February 2016

A cheery vast void...describes winter so well. Poetic perfection.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 August 2018

Snowflakes keep falling Like petals of white blossoms A cheery vast void........thrilling expression. Beautiful haiku on winter nicely executed.10

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Akhtar Jawad 04 June 2018

A great Haiku submitted by my friend in June,2016 and I read it, today, I regret!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 January 2018

Haiku- Winter…beautifully expressed! Liked the use of simile..... loved reading this elegant little poem…short but expressive! Thanks dear madam for sharing…10

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Kavya . 08 February 2016

i agree with Kelly Kert, u have viewed the wintry frost snow from your abode! Excellent! A Chilly wintry morning A blanket and a hot cuppa not sure if its dawn or dusk!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 07 February 2016

You covered all four seasons beautifully in your Haikus. Thank you.

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