Snowflakes keep falling
Like petals of white blossoms
A cheery vast void
Simple, just a plain image of sorts that tickles (if I may use that words) our many senses and makes us feel the warmth that a beautiful description of snow can give. Thank you Valsa ma'am...
A cheery vast void...describes winter so well. Poetic perfection.
A wonderful haiku dear madam. Loved it.5 stars and to my favourites.
Snowflakes keep falling Like petals of white blossoms A cheery vast void........thrilling expression. Beautiful haiku on winter nicely executed.10
A great Haiku submitted by my friend in June,2016 and I read it, today, I regret!
Haiku- Winter…beautifully expressed! Liked the use of simile..... loved reading this elegant little poem…short but expressive! Thanks dear madam for sharing…10
i agree with Kelly Kert, u have viewed the wintry frost snow from your abode! Excellent! A Chilly wintry morning A blanket and a hot cuppa not sure if its dawn or dusk!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautifulllllllllll, I can visualise it. You have way with words. Beautiful haiku my friend.