Haiku- Summer Poem by Valsa George

Haiku- Summer

Rating: 5.0


Sun, ripe citrus fruit
Sapphire sky flecked with clouds
Tarmac road steaming

Saturday, February 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 06 February 2016

When I think of the tarmac, with undulating hot air distorting the vista, it makes me appreciate winter a little more.: -)

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 06 February 2016

Ooooh! Steaming tarmac....Reddened sun.... tr bright blue sky....! You make us feel the heat of summer. Excellent.

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Souren Mondal 06 February 2016

Summers are always beautiful to me for some strange reasons.. Maybe just the afternoon's silence, that is wonderful.. A wonderful haiku Valsa ma'am.. Thank you for sharing..

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Nosheen Irfan 06 February 2016

Awesome. Great descriptive skill displayed here. The reader can actually feel the summer heat.

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Hazel Durham 07 February 2016

Brilliant write, I felt I was there in summer on that steaming tarmac road as I read your vivid Haiku!

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Vaibhav Simha 28 April 2020

The imagery used is astounding and greatly reminiscent of rich summer. However, I believe the second line only has 6 syllables. Saf-fire (2) sky(1) fleck-d (1) with (1) clou-ds (1) .

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Mahtab Bangalee 03 February 2019

beautiful imagery of summer

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A reading of the poem makes me feel the boiling heat of summer on the earth and the celestial beauty up in the sky

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 November 2017

Wonderful imagery. Nice haiku on summer. Enjoyed.

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 March 2017

Respecting the ways of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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