Hold On Poem by Siyabonga A Nxumalo

Hold On

Rating: 4.7


When love creates
Hatred,
Dispute and
Violence...
Ours enhance honesty.
When love increase
Predicaments and sorrow...
Our increase cherish.

When this perilous game
Turn to be perilous,
When these lion jaws
In a doves mouth,
Turn to be detrimental,
Our love proclaim peace.

Yes this is a dangerous game,
Yes we are no corkers.
But nobody is perfect,
Even the prophets,
Preachers and Popes.
Let us hold on together,
Let us hold on together.

When wind abduct us,
When people mislead us,
When eloquence tear us apart,
Lets hold on together,
And rectify our mistakes.

And bear in mind that,
'Men are from Mars and
Women are from Venus',
And learn to notice
Our mere differences.

So we can live as
Fearless doves in our
Love land.

Where there's no place
For torture and greediness.
For prevarication and retaliation,
And preserve our love
By loyalty and holding on together.

Lets creates harmony,
Lets paint this gift
With love colours and
With joy and adoration,
Where love slaves and tyranny,
Where frail and dingy things
Are not preserved.

A place for you and me,
A place for me and you,
A place for us,
T o embrace each other,
To hold on together,
With our deep and everlasting emotions
Of warmth and tenderness
And mutual devotion.
Lets hold on together,
Till the end of time,
Lets hold on together,
Lets hold on together.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Binish Cd 18 December 2011

a very touching words

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Rekha Mandagere 18 December 2011

If love is bounded by devotion and commitment then all imperfections will dissolve in the process., Nice theme and your imagery is excellent.

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Vipins Puthooran 17 December 2011

Nobody is perfect; That's n't a problem But the problem is How can we be perfect to all the problems? I like this poem! ! !

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Dead Leaf 14 December 2011

hey really great.. i like it very much....

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Unwritten Soul 09 December 2011

Again you hit the paper with your crashing mind, that was beautiful and pretty well written Siya...I like the way you composed the poem, it's original and the messages was clear! More ink need to be written my friend! _Unwritten Soul

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Kara Towe 06 January 2012

Beautiful! ! ! Really love it! ! ! :) [3

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Ramesh Rai 31 December 2011

A HEART FELT WRITE AND A BEAUTIFUL POEM. WISH YOU A HAPPY NEW YEAR

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Hans Vr 29 December 2011

This is a masterpiece, Siyabongo. Fantastic write. The joy of love, the holding on to our commitment I love every verse of this excellent poem.

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Yho! Yho! Am realy lost of words, when you right its as if you intend to amaze..buty ofcause that's the intention of all poets, and above here, is sometjing out of this world, amuseing would be an under-word for a recognition of this poem... Thanks for shaing it bro.... Wow! !

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Crimson Love 18 December 2011

This poem is Truly incredible, every word of every line was simply perfect. Very well written, my friend.

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