why are you not here
why didn't you take me with you
why didn't you say good bye
aren't you going to protect me
why do you get to run away
when am i going to be good enough
i thought maybe if you loved me
you would have let me escape with you
isnt there any hope for a lonely child
take me away from his hurtful words
his angry hands
please come back for me
i will wait as long as i can
then i will be gone
i will have ran too
just like you, mom
Well written, and I can certainly identify with it. Filled with emotion, good job. CAK
Oh my friend, that was hurtful to listen this...a prove that you really expressed this very well..but i know, the hurt not equal as you have now...i can heal perfectly but i can say, be patient and if no one to look after you, you must remember to take care of yourself coz it's your life, people never make it perfect for you, but you can! as long as you love yourself, smile Silentpoet, heal the broken and let the pieces merge again :) wish you the best_Unwritten Soul
now this is my second time reading this poem of yours and it really made me cry i feel wat u are going threw........ and i really thank u for giving me advice on wat i should do to get out of this predicument
wow great poem: +) i understand it a little were your coming from, but its good
A tramp, a rich man, a poet, a dreamer and a lonesome soul... They all need love and affection... Your poem has a beautiful agony that I find bewitching... Well done...
I don't usually enjoy short poems but yours are fine, although I like this one a lot more. Keep it up.
You sent a chill down my spine.. and made the hairs on my neck raise up... i didnt find my answers till i was 28yrs old... i hope you find someone who truly deserves you SG..X..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A really sad but beautiful poem. Great write.