Hurt Poem by Rosie Bourget


Rating: 4.7

Sometimes in life
Sooner or later
We can be sad and bitter
To our surroundings
That is because
Our lives are tormented by nightmares
Nightmares that are our reality
As the years pass by, they grow bigger
Being nurtured by our growing sorrow
Sometimes we look at our lives and wonder
Is life worth all this pain we have been through
Then we realize our loved ones
Are the reasons why we become this way
They are the ones that make our hearts bleed
All they give us is pain
That we cannot explain
When we try to make it
They go around and break it
They go all the way
To block our way
And then here we are sitting in the dark
With a broken heart!

Sunday, February 1, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love hurts
Britte Ninad 07 June 2018

N-ightmare hugs my brain I-nk of dream kisses my pain G-rasps me fully with the bundle of bone H-urts me amid my sweet dream T-ricks and traps my to walk on showing path M-erely I follow a cheated dreamy birth A-im is destined to beat my sanity R-ightly I find myself in insanity E-rase O dear all my path of tears ACROSTIC!

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Rosie Bourget 14 June 2018

Nicely written acrostic. Thank you so much.

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Chinedu Dike 01 March 2015

I believe that whatever the situation we face in life, the pains, sorrows, disappointments... we must learn to keep thing in stride. We must propel our spirits to greater altitude, so that we can be able to look down on our tribulations. I like the articulation and penning of the poem. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Rosie Bourget 24 December 2015

Thanks for your input Dike. Merry Christmas to you and your family.

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Aniruddha Pathak 16 February 2020

Feelings of hurt beautifully analysed and depicted in this piece.

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Kesav Easwaran 20 January 2020

Sentiments and attachments. they are the summary of mundane life. Liked the mild sad tone in this well written piece 10+

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 August 2019

Sad and bitter! ! ! ! ! Facing the odds of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mahtab Bangalee 20 June 2019

hurt the hurt the loving heart they break it make flat o; yet we the love live in light kick the dark................///

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 March 2019

A poignant and heart rending write. The pain is greater when it is caused by our loved ones. But sometimes the pain they caused fuels us to be better, strive harder to have a life of our own, far better than the life they have. Pain will be.healed in God's own time. A wonderful poem that deals with realities of life. Well conveyed write.

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Rosie Bourget 14 March 2019

Family members tend to depend on each other for support, advice, and money, among other things. We also tend to be emotionally invested in one another. When someone you are so committed to says or does something to hurt you, it is perceived as worse than when someone you are less committed to does the same thing. I appreciate you Rose Marie. Thanks a bunch for your comment.

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