I Cant Hear You Poem by Rajnish Manga

Rajnish Manga

Meerut / Now at Faridabad

I Cant Hear You

Rating: 4.6


when i cant hear you
my body is deaf, my soul is frost...

(Original Poem written by puti ira)

We may also write this poem the other way round
as under:

when my body is deaf, my soul is frost...
i cant hear you.

(Please compare both versions and enjoy)
(Original Poem written by Puti)

Friday, July 20, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: body,change,deafness,hearing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 20 July 2018

The original poem articulates lack of love that causes damages to body and soul of an ardent lover.....while, your version speaks of a deformed person who can hardly avail love! Both the versions have different significance! A brilliant write!

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Michael Walker 15 October 2019

I find it irritating when someone asks me to repeat what I said. Did they listen properly? I often think they did not. Conversation is an important art.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 July 2018

A great philosophical write. Thought provoking. Cleverly penned succinct write.10++++

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Rajnish Manga 28 July 2018

So kind of you to have visited this page with a very positive feedback.

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Anil Kumar Panda 26 July 2018

Both the version are excellent. In the first version love has been given priority. As without the lover the body turns stiff remembering him. In the second due to physical deformity may be reason. Enjoyed.

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Rajnish Manga 28 July 2018

This is an excellent analysis- comparative & comprehensive. Thanks, Anil ji.

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Rajnish ji, both interpretations are profound and most philosophical. Brevity and brilliance combine to make this a super write.10+

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Rajnish Manga 22 July 2018

Thank you, Geeta ji. This was just in the passing that I thought of changing the tenor of the poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 21 July 2018

when i cant hear you my body is deaf, my soul is frost... I think when we fail to listen to the nature our body becomes deaf and our soul is turned in a frost. Both the translations are beautiful.

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Rajnish Manga 21 July 2018

Thank you very much, Sir, for sharing your views about the poem.

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Meerut / Now at Faridabad
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