Time went on slipping further
You too slipped away
In span of time.
Helplessly I watched you
Both slipping
With no grip on
I couldn't hold on your hands.
Well time was running very short
My spell to tell
I love you
Was very long.
Before I could
Tell you anything
I lost grip of you.
I couldn't hold on your hands.
Was it my love for you,
Was not strong enough,
Was it just one side affair,
that time in my square was very shorter.
I kept running inside a circle
If I could break away the square
I would have been in your arms my dear!
©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR
© 2014 Geetha Jayakumar
Note. My Imagination.
When we are troubled our mind is working so much harder. Overthinking. We have given our all, often too much. Penned so beautifully. I thank you
A beautiful poem about lost love. Makes one nostalgic of one's young days.
I kept running inside a circle If I could break away the square I would have been in your arms my dear! ............................beautiful...
Love slips away - hold on to the hands firmly. Beautifully put in the poem.
Your heart touches us all like no other, again I read these words seeing future light shining.
Briefly have conveyed the message strongly.........................very nice
Some poems I missed, now this lovable poem made me to a dream of reality Was it my love for you, Was not strong enough, Was it just one side affair, that time in my square was very shorter.
The beauty i see these line is uncomparable. Yes we hide our feelings for a longtime. by the time we are people the person slips away and we linger then for a life. Time went on slipping further You too slipped away In span of time.
Wow! ! ! ..such an excellent poem Geehta Madam...loved it like anything...Thanks.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I am reminded of the old proverb ' Strike while the iron is hot.' But then I have an opinion of my own, ' May be one may miss his bus to catch an aeroplane! ' The true cards of life, we do not know, and there lies the truth of life. A beautiful poem, as always, from you Ma'am.