I Lay In Bed Listening To The Cadence Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

I Lay In Bed Listening To The Cadence

Rating: 5.0


I lay in bed listening to the cadence
Of words in stories and poems
I think my grandfather
Must have had wanderlust
I remember him talking
About his wish to visit Cairo in Egypt
And he would take off bus trips
To various countries round Africa

Indonesia has given me
A home where I can be
Who I want to be
And do what I want to do
I love this country
And its people, its art
I hope I can make and dedicate
A contribution towards the future

I feel we together need
A storyteller of things
Rich and strange
To counterbalance the learned sociological, anthropological
That bypass sounds, smells, sights, and ambiance
That not writing for the converted
The book has been worth
All the joy and effort
Exhaustion in its creation
Above all they must be simple
Without being simplistic and have avoided
Foreign words as much as possible

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Juan Carlos Abeti 01 September 2009

hope tou can do it, it always grea to find a place to feel at home...

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Rajaram Ramachandran 01 September 2009

Hearing bedtime stories from grandfather keeps the grandson's mind calm to get a good sleep for the night.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 01 September 2009

good and well penned!

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Ency Bearis 01 September 2009

beautiful write...nice one to read......

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 01 September 2009

This is another narrative poem from which to learn. Your narrative 'I lay in bed listening to the cadence' about laying in bed listening to cadences of words in stories and poems that makes you think about grandfather and his trips to Africa in effect made you, feel a deep love and appreciation for your home/Indonesia. You are one of the storytellers of your time...keep telling them for they will be passed on to many generations behind. I rate this poem a 10

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Lady Grace 12 September 2009

what a peaceful sleep..thats good, ,

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Christina Phan 04 September 2009

great and lovely one kept it up and thnks for sharing 10++

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Nizamettin Esen Haymanali 03 September 2009

Beautiful poem well penned. Thank your for sharing.10

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Catrina Heart 02 September 2009

such a lovely narrative poem you have shared here....Thanks! ! !

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Louis Rams 01 September 2009

apparantly poetry is hereditery, for you was taught thru his words and you are following the footsteps.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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