I Lost You Poem by Vaibhav Pandey

I Lost You

Rating: 4.3

When the world was awake
in awe of the dazzling light
showered by your resplendent face,
I was slumbering in a corner
amidst the darkness of ignorance.

Filled with voidness, now,
have all my life to rue,
love could have blossomed,
but instead, it flew.

Smiling at my ill fate,
I feel I didn't deserve you
And that must be the reason why,
I lost you.

Sathyanarayana M V S 07 February 2009

Touching poem. I feel this is the right tone to be used for broken-heart poetry. Very well composed.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 08 February 2009

the lost would be found too....an amasing low tone there bringing out the emotional failiure

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ata khan 08 February 2009

Sad, but with beauty style.10/10

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Chitra - 09 February 2009

sometimes life's lessons come by in a harsh manner but so much to learn from them..nothing is lost...

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Meggie Gultiano 17 February 2009

a lovely piece, my dear..try not to lost her again. because you are more than worthy. Hugs, Meggie

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Miriam Maia Padua 22 August 2009

nice style and thoughts... sad yet so lovely expressed love and despair in most touching thoughts.. 10++ Lovelots, Maia

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Rup Pokharel 29 July 2009

Vaibhav jii, May god bless you. Do run your pen and use more your brain there are so many longing to read more and more from you.

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Ritty Patnaik 25 July 2009

lovely poem vaibhav! love will surely come your way, like a wave in the heart.best wishes. ritty

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Perhaps you lost your love because you didn't realize, but perhaps you will find another just as beautiful. I particularly liked the rhyming couplet a the end of the last two stanzas. Great poem. 10 Karin Anderson

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Kalyani Rajalingham 29 April 2009

Nothing is ever lost until you lose Hope. Learn to grow wings then my dear friend!

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